Scarlet Ibis
Down below is my Scarlet Ibis essay. That was one of first essay that I wrote I got a two out of five which I know that doesn't sound good but I kind of glad that I got that my teacher was hard when grade thing these essay's because then I wouldn't know what to improve on. Which is my past tense meaning that I'm talk about the book doesn't exist when it is still does. My goal by the end of the year is to a least get a four on one of my writing pieces. Also not have to go back and revise a lot of past tense sentences.