This year I have learned a lot about writing both creative and essay writing. One the thing that I have learned is that commentary is something that you have to have not only to give your opinion on that one concrete detail but to also help with so many or parts of your essay like your topic sentence and your thesis. The thing that I think I have improve the most on is probably my thesis statements. I think this is what really sets up your whole essay and if you don't it right then it can mess with your whole essay and that uses to kinda freak me out. I think something I need to improve on is probably that I use past tense as if it use to be when it still is. That probably going to be the thing that I want to improve on next year. Down below is one of the essay I wrote this year.